Black Poetry : suicidal signs look out for them

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  1. ballerSon

    ballerSon Member MEMBER

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    Shes sitting in her room staring out the window.
    Wishing, praying, and hoping that no one can tell shes crying behind a rain drenched window.
    Her sorrow sets in thinking and pondering what could I have done wrong
    He came in cutting me down like a lumber jack with a chainsaw
    Cutting and sawing away at my feelings
    Im not feeling this **** talking down to me
    Showing no mercy
    Been nothing but good to you
    I just asked you why you was late baby I missed you
    It was no reason to hit me and drag through the house
    Cuss at me and cage me up like a **** mouse
    Im your wife here til death do use part
    For sickness and health
    Thoughts of bringing you to your death
    Nobody will no what happened I've constantly told myself


    Bruises are healing but only externally
    My mental is fading getting weaker and weaker
    Unholy desires beginning to take over
    The thought of killing you comes a lil more often
    But I love you I love you I keep telling myself
    His life I cannot take for I love him to much
    Turn the hand on myself feeling low down and unworthy
    Back in this window on another rainy day
    Tears pouring out of my eyes no longer caring who sees
    I bought a nine millimeter gonna take my life
    All because of those bullets that you just call words


    P.S. watch suicidal tendencies people in this situation almost always ask for help to be stop dont ingore the plea no matter how small or unusual.
     
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    I know that this is a little dark for most but ive had friend that thought of killing themselves and i was the person they cried out to for help so this is a touchy subject to me
     
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    well felt sometime when reaching out it goes ingored
    sadly but true , hopefully i'll be able to spot such act before it happen
     
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    I know those words…heard them loud and clear
    Seen the toll they take. Felt the pain and read the fear
    Year after year, so many are abused
    Blamed and accused. Beat down and misused

    But no one knew

    ‘til…

    YES. WE MUST PAY ATTENTION TO THEIR CRIES

    Heartfelt piece.
     
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    Dark subjects are very much in need of discussion, because knowing signs can save lives. Almost 6 yrs ago a cousin of mine took his own life. I think of him often, he was so young and had so much to experience in life.

    Thanks for sharing this heartfelt poem

    And Welcome to Destees!

    Feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:heart:
     
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