Black Poetry : Sugar

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SUGAR
    **********

    Sugar... (((acting up)))
    Without as much as a clue
    Almost out of thrills
    Rolling cigarettes too

    Pressure... (((sky-high)))
    Since the loss of your Honey
    Been - too - much - month
    At the end of your money

    Doctors say...
    Watch your weight
    Don't eat fried-
    Cut down on the salt
    But you still eat swine

    Gotta...
    Have a lil' taste
    Now and then
    Beer,
    Some wine-
    To pass the time
    A nice slow gin

    Putting off exams
    When you know
    Yours is due...
    Better pray,
    That monkeypox ~
    Don't find you!!!

    :heart:

    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh, yes.... feelin ya sugar... tyte piece... AMEN :)


    peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heard dat .............do da check up thang !
    tyte flow
     
  4. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear ya! Something we must do for sure.....
    nice reminder 1poetsought

    AqueenPassing


    :wave:
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honor the temple of those you love-

    1poetsought ~

    much love!
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what about the Brown sugar?
     
  7. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brown sugar's best when it's unprocessed!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hearing you clear, our body is our temple...nicely put
    Peace
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :laugh: monkey pox?!?!?! your too much but you do have a point about that blood suger
     
  10. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi 1 Poet,

    This is a GREAT piece!!

    I hear you!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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