Black Poetry : SUGAR ALONG THE RIM

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SUGAR ALONG THE RIM

    She was talking, while I was mixing up a sweet drink
    Piggybacking from something I said that really made her think
    Giving her point of view of what was, and how things should be
    She spoke her mind as she’d been giving liberty to … she was at ease and set free
    I listened as I mixed this cocktail for the lady of a chocolate brown shade
    Two parts Bacardi … three parts lemonade
    Pouring it in a cocktail glass a little ways below the brim
    The finished product was sweet drink in a glass with sugar crusted along the rim
    I handed it to her without the need to feel remorse or repentance
    She took a sip, and whatever she was saying, she stopped in mid-sentence
    Licked the rim of the glass like a child licking a candy cane
    Preoccupied by either the taste, or a buzz, I swore she momentarily forgot her name
    She sipped on the hard lemonade from the glass with its rim, sugar-waxed
    With each sip of the cocktail, she became more … and more relaxed
    And started buzzing, like a church mother humming a hymn
    She took her tongue and licked the sprinkled sugar, coated along the rim

    Her mouth, now moist from the cool soft sips
    I took a pinch of granulated sugar and dabbed them on her lips
    She licked her lips seductively as our eyes were locked in a dance
    Giving me a come-hither look, welcoming my advance
    I took a cue from her movements, letting her body language be the guide
    I took a pinch of sugar and asked her to open wide
    And in a mood more mellow, and less high strung
    I sprinkled sugar crystals and an aroused and anticipating tongue
    I moved to close the distance, to engage in a bit of bliss
    Sweetened with a pinch of sugar, I moved in for a kiss
    I tasted melting sugar crystals as our tongues slid past each other
    Locked in a loving lingual litigation, we tongue caressed one another
    One thing lead to another, and another thing lead to something else still
    With all the tasting, touching, and teasing, we move towards a mutual thrill
    My hands roam her body, as her hands roam my back
    I rummage through the clothes closest to the skin of a beauty, enameled in basic black


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    http://www.gspoetry.com/sugar-along-the-rim-erotic-poems-182831.html
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whenever I peep your name in the forums ...I brace myself for the pleasure ride I always get when reading you ...thanks poet!
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As much as I wanted to put the whole piece in this thread, I don't want to be banned from the board. I trust that you read all eight verses, and that it was to your liking ;) Thanx for the read
     
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    As we grown accustomed, your wonderful word choice has taken us to vivid passion.
     
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    Ok garlicsalt99, I haven't even read your piece yet but I just had to respond before I did. I am smiling so hard cause I know this is gonna be GOOD! LOL!!! I'll hit you back in a second!
     
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    Ummm, WOW! Its never a let down when I read your work! WOW! LOL Didnt I just say that? Let me go. I'm starting to repeat myself!
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LoveDestiny (a.k.a. HopelisRomantic) ... it does something for me to read a comment from you. Not to take away from the others who have read my work during my history with destee.com, but there is something in your responses that just hooks me, and makes me feel ... I don't know, I can't quite put my finger on it, but that's a good thing ... and it's a good feeling.

    Thanx for taking the time to read the words that flows from my pen to the printed page :)
     
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    whew love the write hon so much fire and passion........mmmmmmmmn good...
     
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    Nevar ... much luv to you my friend. Thanx for the read :)
     
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    Well, I should be thanking you! I think I speak for all of us...you continually "Take us There" like nobody else can. I have some favorite poets here at Destee and you are definitely at the top of that list!

    LovesDestiny (a.k.a. HopelisRomantic)

    P.S. Don't make it so long before the next masterpiece!!!! Your fans can hardly wait!
     
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