Black Poetry : sucker punch...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dnommo, Jun 28, 2001.

  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just a lil' somethin' to think about...

    morning after
    11 shot, 11 bled
    5 dead all over
    the struggle
    but what must it
    be to see life
    pass us by as
    the heat of the
    streets melt my
    tim's that drag
    cuz the pain of
    life is too heavy
    to run from...
    no-bo-dy-knows...
    the trou-ble i've seen
    unless they confess
    to crimes comitted
    that the innocent was
    convicted while the
    trus culprit sits at
    home and watches his
    deeds go unanswered
    by a silent justice...
    just-ice is all i need
    to cool the heat
    of the wretched place;
    hell on earth? since
    when did it have
    another address?
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    MO

    you are well focused

    you know i know

    this type of flow

    Peace
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Street,

    man is there anyone else that i would expect to understand? Well definitely blakverb, and some others but bro' we holding it down ova here...

    thanks for the read...
     
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    My experience

    is limited to the Streets...except the country. So I can't bare witness. Keep believing and we shall over come....
     
  5. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAN!! DES BE TOO SMOOTH

    LOVIN DES HERE FEED ME MORE!!:D
     
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    likes this diggin the style
     
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    The feeling of being sucker punched by reality nearly every time you step out your door. Umph...Tight scribe.
     
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