Black Poetry : Sucidal thoughts

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes i think about sucide
    Ending this roller coaster ride
    At rock bottom with no where to sink
    Sucidal but not in the way you think
    I want to stop the emotional flow
    So I can stopping feeling so low

    Sucidal thoughts
    Sucidal thoughts
    Sucidal thoughts

    I wish that I could choke out my emotions
    And no longer have to go through the motions
    Motions that got me losing the essence of me
    Feeling like I am drowning in a bottomless sea
    A sea of despair, frustrations and hopelessness
    I just want be able to rise above all this madness

    Sucidal thoughts
    Sucidal thoughts
    Sucidal thoughts

    Wondering if i could cut open my bleeding heart
    Release all the love and totally empty that part
    For who has need of a part that only brings pain
    And helps me to lose everything I ever gained

    Sucidal thoughts
    Sucidal thoughts
    Sucidal thoughts

    Wishing for the death of my emotions
    But still longing for happy endings
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    So feel this ........I tell u sometime , sometime but i hold a key that's very Good and stronger
    then anything in life itself , that's FAITH in my GOD
     
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    Is it about ending a roller coaster ride
    Or flushing the crap we keep stored up inside

    The crap that keeps pushing us along our crappy way
    Driving us to give up…but waking us each day

    Reminding us that our situation isn’t as bad as some may be
    And this bottomless sea called life…is the one you share with me

    These emotions that you talk about
    Are begging you to see
    All the things in life you talk about
    Are things you’re destined to be

    Do not fret over emotions
    Of a dire or fearful kind
    Understand that tomorrow brings
    An opportunity for brighter times
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh baller i am so in love with your reply it makes me want to give it just that one more try
     
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