Quiet Poetry Lounge : Such Warmth

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such warmth
    Cascades through my core
    blanketing me with golden stardust.
    And although I've felt a soul's essence before,
    this...this feels like the heavens
    opened up and decided to let love pour...
    Such warmth...
    Invades my being
    allowing the midnight sky to
    enter inside releasing drips of joy freeing
    tears of meteor showers...
    As the moonlight serenades
    I can feel you entering my realm
    such warmth cascades
    with you at the helm
    so often you called unto me
    in this mystical way
    until I trusted myself enough
    to let myself simply lay...
    and stay...
    open to it
    Allowing me to experience
    the pleasure
    and the treasure
    of
    such
    warmth
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when one can open to such and cascade deep into it's beauty
    the warm covered blanket feels so good , i've had the pleasure to
    feel this warmth myself and i mean it felt good .
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, the warmth certainly does feel inviting. Happy to know you've felt this way too. Thanks a million Rich.
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A piece fitting of being beside a fireplace with someone to ignite the ambers of love. Nice
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was so poetic of you to say, thank you Tha Emissary for such a nice response.
     
  6. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww ...


    beautifull....sis



    it is such a blessing to feel such warmth....





    and hug the warmth when it is there...








    LoveAuroraflower:heart:
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, it certainly is Auroraflower, I appreciate your response, thank you.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes your word choice in this piece was divine. Feelings of such warmth should be fullly enjoyed and taken with the utmost sincerity.This was a beautiful piece.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you soulful2006, you've been writing some beautiful pieces yourself, appreciated.
     
  10. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Such warmth
    Cascades through my core
    blanketing me with golden stardust.
    And although I've felt a soul's essence before,
    this...this feels like the heavens
    opened up and decided to let love pour..."

    sister, u definitely kno how 2 raise the temperature round heya, & i don't mean :cook: either! i esp enjoyed ur rhyming pattern. :jump:

    darn, i almost missed this 1.
     
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