Black Poetry : Succession of Sounds

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Upon entrance
    he wanted to hear
    the sounds that his
    thrusts would create

    Provoking monosyllabic
    words that are uttered in a
    single tone of her already
    shaken voice

    ...................... m m m m

    tangled noises squeezing
    through clenched jaws
    and sliding through
    tightly gritted teeth
    until sexual relief emits
    oooohs and aaahhhs
    chanted in repitition
    then become collected in
    pinache-filled
    pillows

    With her closed eyes
    she
    counted the number of feathers
    dancing inside of the cases that
    held them ~

    ... when he entered from the rear
    she would lose count ...
    only to begin again

    Libido's sequences
    oscillated in relative value
    forming mathematical
    sex symbols that
    polka'd
    on dotted
    sheets until soaked

    Soft squeals would follow
    hot and heavy breathing
    that would increase and
    decrease simultaneously
    measuring body temperatures on
    a scale from 0 - 100 degrees
    celsiUS
    in less than one hour
    and there cums
    a sameness in tone -- intonation --
    disguised by climaxes
    covering missionary-style which
    uncovered her "til' now hidden spot"

    ... And heaven, he awaits ...

    with his rejoiced inflection of
    alpha male grunts
    heard from the lull of his
    own ahhh's and ohhh's

    ..............................m m m m

    with rest after sex
    they heard no noise
    which is also
    the sweet sound of success




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2...

    What the hell are we doing missing these :hot: pieces????

    I'm shocked that this went untouched - but hey, I'm the first so I feel hella privileged!!! :wink:

    :love:
    GQ
     
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    ooooh my goo'ness!!!!

    I'm in de-greement with GQ!!!!! How the hell I mist-ed this????

    Sweet down to that all too beautiful sound of success!

    tight!

    a
     
  4. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm finna drank some ice water...

    and then maybe take a cold shower when I get home
    and errrr ahhh, then I'm gone read dis **** again!!!!!!!
    How dare you do this to me when I'm at work :lol:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    HOT!!!
    I hope there's someone at the end handing out cold compresses to cool us down before exiting. :D

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2.


    ...since we already done established dat you&me
    be feelin' each otha poetical-ly from tyme to tyme...

    all imma do now sis... is just wave my hand!! :lol:

    mmm... mmm... mmm!!!

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FaammUUhhleee

    :D Did I tellz ya'll how much I lovez
    erry sangle one of you mo' fo's up in heah?! :lol:

    GQ I am one smilin' sistah right now cause of the fact that you found this piece in the "archive" room & pulled it back up to da front.... :heart: ya' doll!!

    Sustah A Mmm Mmm Mmm~ and you know that them sounds be blowin' your mind... cause yes they are hella tyte!!

    Danilyn :lol: sistah friend, I'm crackin' up about your response.... "readin' this piece at work & Imma have to go home and"..... :lol: and that's all I'm gon' say.... and that's that! :lol: :lol:

    Coco :eek: :lol: handin' out water and sponges to soak up all the sapp we all be leavin' drippin' on these pages! :lol:

    GA Sista.... I can see you wavin' your hands in the air now! :lol: You are too much!


    Thank you all for the read.... it's funny how sometimes there are so many family members pushin' out their verses on these pages that sometimes some scribes get lost in the shuffle or pushed back a page or two without being noticed....

    Then there are times when the boards are barely moving or it's like nobody is really droppin' any scribes at all and then some of the pieces just sit there .... without moving an inch.....

    It's all love though! I'm glad ya'll enjoyed the read! :heart:
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No Doubt N2!!!!

    But you know a brotha like G, can't let a sista like you, N2, not get ya props when the props are due!!!

    This piece was :puke: sickening and :hot: and just pure unadulterated :flame:!!!!

    :love:
    GQ
     
  9. MrAdams

    MrAdams Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feeling this...:D

    nice job sweetie...

    have a nice day!:x:
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    Now I remember seeing this but evidently I missed it...cause this is doooooooooope (I just wanted to express myself in a hip hopped tone)!

    But hold on...

    "Libido's sequences
    in oscillated in relative value
    forming mathematical
    sex symbols that
    polka'd
    on dotted sheets until
    soaked"

    that was on point..........................you's a bad girl.

    "10"

    blak
     
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