Black Poetry : subtly

[Twofish]

he showed me....
subtly
that pleasure does not have to precede pain

he moved me....
righteously
the way the breeze shifts the direction of rain

he told me....
honestly
he wasn't looking for just a fling thing

he wrote me....
gently
and methodically into his heart-strings

he showed me...
subtly
that pleasure does not have to precede pain

he moved me...

etc.
etc.
etc.

 

[GA_Sunshyne]

2FISH....

he moved you...
...and this piece moved me.

wonderfully written... i loved all of it!

LuvU4Life...
SunShyne~

 

[$$RICH$$]

AND

WHAT HE DONE WAS IN A BLISS
BUT U JUST SENT ME A SINGLE KISS
GURLIE GURL U FLIP THIS PIECE
FROM YA POETIC THOUGHTS
LOVIN IT...

 

[Afridancr]

Two-fish

I am *moved* by your artistic 'flow'etry!!!
Sis, I love your work!

 

[Desert Storm]

Hmmm

You know what? You're right. I love this. I need this. I feel this. I remember that it was there,once upon a time ago. I believe this. I recieve this. I want this. I touch this. I feel this. I read this,everyday. And know that my time will come,gracefully,in it's own time day and age. And when it comes,THERE WILL BE NO REGRETS.
LOVE this.
You really touched me right in my heart sis.
I really appreciate it so much.
Thanks.
Desert Storm