Black Poetry : subtly

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Twofish, Apr 28, 2001.

  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he showed me....
    subtly
    that pleasure does not have to precede pain

    he moved me....
    righteously
    the way the breeze shifts the direction of rain

    he told me....
    honestly
    he wasn't looking for just a fling thing

    he wrote me....
    gently
    and methodically into his heart-strings

    he showed me...
    subtly
    that pleasure does not have to precede pain

    he moved me...

    etc.
    etc.
    etc.
    :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2FISH....

    he moved you...
    ...and this piece moved me.

    wonderfully written... i loved all of it! :)

    LuvU4Life...
    SunShyne~
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AND

    WHAT HE DONE WAS IN A BLISS
    BUT U JUST SENT ME A SINGLE KISS
    GURLIE GURL U FLIP THIS PIECE
    FROM YA POETIC THOUGHTS
    LOVIN IT...
     
  4. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two-fish

    I am *moved* by your artistic 'flow'etry!!!
    Sis, I love your work!
     
  5. Desert Storm

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    Hmmm

    You know what? You're right. I love this. I need this. I feel this. I remember that it was there,once upon a time ago. I believe this. I recieve this. I want this. I touch this. I feel this. I read this,everyday. And know that my time will come,gracefully,in it's own time day and age. And when it comes,THERE WILL BE NO REGRETS.
    LOVE this.
    You really touched me right in my heart sis.
    I really appreciate it so much.
    Thanks.
    Desert Storm :jumping: :heart:
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is just a lovely piece, dear poetess. keep on scribin', gurl...i'm lovin' it.
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just the kind of guy you need :wink:
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was subtly wonderful, I likes
     
  9. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U be...

    ...deep like that, sis. For real, ma; do you have any idea, how much I love and can relate to this piece? We stay on the same page, sis, and I look up to you, from the bottom, *in admiration...:)*
     
  10. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like dhat!!!

    Nice style!!!