Black Poetry : Subtle

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  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Subtle...

    Such is my aura...my omnipresent vibe

    The feeling that you mutually feel inside

    Enveloped by its presence you reminisce on the moment

    The pieces of the puzzle

    Embodied by the lion in the lioness

    All dormant

    Subtle....Passion

    The great equalizer to our libido

    So subtle are the words spoken

    Why so shy? i know there's more

    Free yourself is whats being thought but still we act

    Subtle...From one sense to five all are enticed

    With this foreplay of the mind holding a vice

    So Subtle....

    And delicate....your exterior

    A touch, a kiss, a hug,No words

    But i know that your body concurs

    But yet your confused

    Subtle......are these actions

    Even as they progress you haven't figured it yet

    All you can do is respond

    As one touches various regions you respond with heavy breathing

    So unaware....All because its subtle

    All you can do is respond

    But i know and you don't

    You lie down and i follow after you

    Some more exploration and now your mind starts contemplating

    But yet you don't comprehend

    For its all soo Subtle

    The movements of my fingers

    The words I Utter

    My fragrance

    The way your body reacts

    So vulnerable you become but you can't tell

    All you want is more

    But by the time the moment comes everything is said and done

    But your unaware of what occurred

    you just note a presence in the air

    Why? for it was all Subtle
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well expressed bruh !
    welcome back to the poetic=play=ground
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Subtle sounds like a drug that you have given that young lady! You put this together with excellence bro!
     
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    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you kindly =]
     
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    Brother Poet Mike,

    Subtle, indeed...so subtle there is just as much power in what is not said as there is in what is said. I want to say something intelligent about this piece but I can't. All I can do is feel it. And feel it, I do. I love this piece and visit it often. Thanks for sharing.
     
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    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you kindly glad i can move you =]
     
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    finess...thats the first word that comes to mind. The confidence was prevalent, but not overbearing. Intriguing post Mike. Great Job
     
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