Quiet Poetry Lounge : Substitution

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  1. inner mystery

    inner mystery New Member MEMBER

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    I found myself wanting to be loved. I tried so hard to find it in myself but instead i settled for substitution. A simple twinkle in someone's eye satisfired the hunger in my soul for love. So i gave in yhe best way I knew how. I dug within the depths of my heart to try to find that inner mystery. The mystery was, What inside of me kept me far from satisfaction.I had a passion for something once and as time passed by i saw reality truly through my eyes. The thing that held my heart was simply not fit for me, it did not help me find the love deep within me neither my inner mystery. It was merely a substitution. A substitution for the lost of love that caused me pain and agony.It was merely a clear cover for the things I wouldn't face.
     
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    welcome welcome welcome !!

    da emotion is felt of dis broken love of he
    forth da fire of yo eyes was not da desire
    ya heart so needed
    look to da light of he
    and accept da true love within self to love
    thou self and seek his blessing to get blessed
    welcome to da house of Destee's place
    upon many faces of flow welcome to da family :)
    :jumping: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping:
     
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    If everyone could find this inner mystery, how much sooner folks would/could get to their own inner happiness. Well said poet, liked this one a lot.
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep felt poet..true deep...

    unravel your mystery to us :)

    1luv
     
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