Quiet Poetry Lounge : Substance Abuser...I Got Flows

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lowkey, Sep 4, 2004.

  1. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Substance Abuser...I Got Flows



    I got flows fo dayz, spit is my drug.. I am a substance abuser
    But in a positive light.. I bless u with my talents
    No need fo a needle.. my mouth is the gateway fo the expulsion of lyrics
    I am a substance abuser...
    Pen or mouth my flows leave marks on yo mentality like them cigarette burns on yo granny couch
    I am..... a substance abuser
    Mo deadly then nicotine.. I spit flows that can be blown up on a big screen
    I spit clean.. I am a substance abuser
    Don't need a dealer.. I create my own supply of words that fly..
    Thru my veins to yo brain I am foeva high... off my essence
    I am... a poetic substance abuser
    Reflecting on my past I thought about all the times that I had a itch to create
    So I took my anger n stress out on that paper... now I have grown
    I don't need a pen to begin my thoughts and end yo wonders
    I got that poetic freestyle hunger.. I am a substance abuser wit my flows
    Don't need a program to save me from my addiction.. this is my percription fo personal elevation
    My flows soothe me
    My flows set me free
    I have proof of such substance abuse... my spit is 100% eloquent brain juice...
    I am... a lyrical substance abuser
    Known to all as the man with a thousand words
    1 Million thoughts... a skill like mine could neva be bought
    I got flows... I am a... substance abuser
    If u choose to get abused by my torrential downpour rockin boats ships n canooes wit no oars... walk with me
    Float with me... flow with me.. I am one with my addiction
    I am a abuser... but I abuse with good intentions
    My inner peace comes from poetic invention
    I got flows.. for I am a .... substance abuser.



    -lowkey
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And hopefully, it will be a life long addiction. Whoa, poet, this was awesome. The metaphor of substance abuse representing poetic prowess....this flowed like a river...just loving this, fantastic!
     
  3. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u sistah

    My juices were flowin when I wrote this 10 mins ago.


    I got the concept n jus ran with it... much love




    love360



    -lowkey
     
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    ...the Ultimate addiction

    the only one for me...

    Loving this flow as I too...share your drug of choice ^5


    Much luv poet,
    Sage
     
  5. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Sage.. much appreciation


    **gives sage some of my drug***


    lol



    :)


    -lowkey
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    is dat what i got !
    i knew i was on drugs dis poetic smoke
    u got it and i hope u continue to be da
    poetic abuserrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! tyte drop!
     
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    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :cool: :huh: thanx guys
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and its the real deal addiction
    i know i got it
    nice drop likes the vibe....
     
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