Black Poetry : submission?

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  1. cojamalik

    cojamalik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [FTo him

    I submit gladly

    Because I know he loves me madly

    He recognizes my worth

    I trust him with my heart

    I never worry about it being hurt

    He could have me for breakfast, lunch and dessert

    My friends and fam say I must be berserk

    But they don?t understand the way his tongue works

    His words penetrated my defenses

    I?m defenseless

    No need to strategize

    I?m the only woman for which he has eyes

    Could I be his Eve?

    No need to deceive

    Is he my reprieve?

    The one I can lean on

    Who turn my house into a home?

    Bone of his bone

    Flesh of his flesh.

    When two mesh

    No beginning

    No end

    Devoid of sin

    Loving him only

    Until my body returns to dirt

    The end to his search

    God is his number one priority

    But it is me to which he cleaves

    Patient

    Like the sea

    Waiting to be kissed by the sun.

    I?ve waited for his return

    360 degrees

    Back to the days of Adam and Eve

    Before,

    We were separated by leaves

    Or status or bling

    The superficial things

    We strive to achieve

    Just too say we made it

    Things that only keep us separated.

    Some gone hear this and hate it

    There is no

    I, me or he

    It?s we

    I never have to ask

    He gives to me freely

    Never want to see me bending and kneeling

    I never put him in an awkward place

    Respecting his space

    Most will not understand

    There is no perfect man

    Or woman

    But we fit each other perfectly.

    He heals me.

    I ground him.

    We on level spiritually

    Thanks to GOD

    he found me!

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da love of two souls , this was beautifully expressed and shown ....wow!!!!
     
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    its a wonderful thing when two ppl can share that true bond enjoyed your read
     
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    all thanks be to HIM that made us...

    ...giving to us, all the things we need. congratulations on this union. let it rest in HIS hands.
     
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    Love is a beautiful thing and this was so well expressed in these lines. A excellent scribe.
     
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    WOW!....Well ALRIGHTY-THEN!


    This was POTENT! :terrific:


    Poetry is lyrical and I often think of music when I read good poetry.

    As I read this one, an old Diana Ross song ran thru my head....


    This piece put the :court: down!
     
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