Black Poetry : Subliminal Haiku of Love

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Writing about your love
    and wiping myself with
    the paper to cover me in your
    alphabet
    is magical /and
    I know you can place two
    doves in the air and they'll
    bring back our beginnings
    that
    place where God
    predestined us together
    before we were born/
    I hear you smile
    when the seasons change
    and we are the only
    two that know that seasons
    change everyday
    for folks in love and that's cool
    and I still look for that defining
    moment that kodak moment
    that intervening divinity that
    joined us at our soulful hips
    allowing us to do the bump
    to our rhythm...


    (c)2001 blakverb
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U know I was tryin' to count it out on my fingers just like you showed me :lol:

    Love The WORK Of SUBLIMINAL HAIKU ART

    "Our beginnings
    that predestined us together
    joined our soul rhythm"


    :lol: You are the Master...You are the Last Dragon :lol:

    :lol: :lol: :lol: :jumping: :jumping:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I figured you would try to "count me" so I counted it over three times!!!(and dang near counted it wrong anyway :) )

    blak
     
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    You knew I would have my :uzi: out shootin' if you counted it wrong.........


    :lol:


    But, I love it anyway! :kiss:
     
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