Black Poetry : Sublime Love(A Sherykah&CocoFusion)

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i look at you resting your head
    on your pillow in our bed
    i study your face and
    it's deep majestic features
    my King...
    creamy latte brown
    based in the sunshine that
    falls through the window
    i'm diggin' on the curve of
    your lips...
    as they rest peaceFULL and
    i remember the first time your lips
    whispered in my ear
    we were relaxing on your mother's sofa
    when you whispered love to me
    immediately i lost track of time
    as i drift'd inside your breath into
    a place where only you and i exist
    you were my king and i your queen
    the only subjects were you, me
    a completely sublimed we
    we reigned in love and love rained on us
    there inside my mind love saturated us
    oh so divine was the feeling i felt
    inside your whisper i melted into
    a new...
    i N u became one perfecting time
    and space into our kingdom
    my blak knight...beautiful you
    became my imagination supporting
    our reason to be soul mates
    intertwined both body and mind
    a love soul sublime....
    our hearts beat together a lifetime
    leading us to a heavenly place
    where our soul's mate for eternity
    eternal you have been my KING
    eternally i your queen
    in all things....
    we have remained a whispered breath
    of reality
    we are surrounded by perfected love
    from above for God has blessed us since
    the day you whispered love to me and
    within time you committed your life to me
    a completely sublimed we... i see
    when i look at you resting your
    head on your pillow in our bed
    i study your face and it's
    deep majestic features my King



    Copyright © 2002 s.a.turner & cju
     
  2. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "cute" does not describe this beautiful love song....and you know this, sista Sherykah! :)

    What a peaceful tribute of love for your King. Very good collab, y'all! Looking forward to more.

    Shade
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh hell

    yall heffas knowed this was gone be off the meat rack now didn't ya? Bravo!!!! Ladies.




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    Tight!

    Tight flow--I took in each line and took time to digest what you were saying and I liked it--well done--Amun-Ra

    :cool:
     
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    see u two r just doing ya thing in this lovely flow here
    i loved it !!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad yall felt the flow.
    It was great fusing
    with Sherykah....

    Thanks for the love yall
    It's returned bigtime!

    Sherykah,
    Thanks... it was peace :heart:


    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    beautifully woven artform. liking what you've done together.

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    Poetical Epic Perfection!

    This was absolutely breath taking, I knew if you two worked on something it would be "BOMBASTIC", individually you are superb,
    together absolutely phenomenal, the imagery, the flow of the words and the avante guard stanza's speak of true unity!
    Breathe...whisper...speak of love!
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR POETIC HOUSE!
     
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    applause applause applause

    man you made me feel like a king

    and i wasn't even there

    so you know it's all good


    DSS
     
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