Black Poetry : sublime grays

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Oct 7, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sublime grays of
    Yesterday
    Bend
    Twist
    {in their interim}
    Sway
    To gentle breezes
    Flowing
    Hither
    And
    Thither
    Wondering whether
    True love
    Withers
    Dry up
    Die out
    Lose its intensity
    As you look at me

    I swam the gray matter
    Searching for knowledge

    NONE WAS FOUND

    So…
    I sat on the bank
    Of the river
    LIFE
    Waiting for the
    Salmon
    To return.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man dis walk in tyme was tyght as i sit beside u 4 da wait
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEY $$RICH$$...since we're on the bank of a river...why don't we do a little fishing. if we catch something...we may not even care if the salmon return or no.:)

    PEACE, my brutha.

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  4. Shani

    Shani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here's hoping you catch something wonderful!

    Enjoyed this!

    ~Shani:)
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i sho do like the way you flow thought...
    this was real nice. -7:spinstar:
     
  6. Jasriff

    Jasriff Member MEMBER

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    loved the flow
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hey but did you catch somethin'

    this was a cool piece man

    DSS
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very cool :D
     
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