Black Poetry : Subl(I'm)inally Yours

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MapleXtract, Aug 9, 2001.

  1. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [SIZE=large]I...
    ...appreciate you
    for listening-
    so intently-
    to my initial
    instrumental,
    and allowing
    yourself to
    *f*
    *a*
    *l*
    *l*
    in synch
    with the ~vibe~
    that is,
    my rhythm's keeper.
    [/SIZE]

    [SIZE=large]Love...
    ...is the key
    in~greedy~ent
    in that
    'iluvyooberry-munch pie'
    that you, so generously,
    prepare for me;
    after which, I'll
    *f*
    *a*
    *l*
    *l*
    in awe of your outward ability
    to touch my heart, :heart:
    while sheltering 'beyond-the-surface' realms
    that delve even deeper.
    [/SIZE]

    [SIZE=large]You...
    ...I deem:
    my heartache's
    rivaling adversary;
    my soul's mating ally... :love:
    shall I...
    address the many ways, in which,
    you've given me reason to
    *f*
    *a*
    *l*
    *l*
    in love with you,
    so graciously,
    appointing me
    your desire's
    so(u)le reaper.
    [/SIZE]
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Maple X

    you bringing it up in here
    so deep

    but there's nothing
    subliminal about me
    loving your work

    cause it's all out in the open


    DSSNY
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maple....


    ooohh hellllll yessssssss!!!! :)

    i done trained you well lil Sister of mine!
    (LOL)... GURL!! this is so very very tyght!!
    imma tell mama you been stealin' outta my
    note-book!! :lol:

    really... tho, sis! i'm enraptured!! this is
    wonderfully written!! :)

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MapleX

    YOU GOTZ MADD SKILLZ ...

    Some of us have this 'naturally' while others have to work at it a little harder... you've been blessed
    with talent that no school teacher could have taught...

    The school you went to or learned your techniques from had to be the "School of Xtracted Soul" :D

    No schiitt ma ~

    I love your play on words that capture mental pictures ~

    So refreshingly brilliant my friend... Hit em' up style fo' sho'!

    Madd :heart:
     
  5. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ..my soul's mating ally ????? This line alone...**** !
    I Love This Piece...completely !!!!

    g-man
     
  6. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww...

    [SIZE=huge]I feel the love in great amounts, poets, and Its appreciated and reciprocated. I'm sorry I can't thank you guys individually, but I'm in a bit of a rush. I just wanted to thank you for feelin' this one as much as I do. My inspiration for this one is, truly, where my :heart: is...[/SIZE]
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAPLE ~X

    THIS MAKES ME CRY
    COZ
    ITS SO BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET
    WHAT A LUCKY MAN TO HAVE A
    WOMAN LIKE U
    U BRING IT OUT OF YA HEART
    AND ITS FELT DEEP WITHIN..................:heart:
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    always nice to see a woman...

    openly appreciating her man.:) BEAUTIFUL FLOW, HERE.

    thanks for sharing it.
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** Maple!!!!!

    Why ya gotta hurt us (me) like this!!!!

    This exploded all ova this joint!!! :uzi:

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  10. SuNNiOne

    SuNNiOne Active Member MEMBER

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    This is Excellent work. I loved everything about it!
     
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