Quiet Poetry Lounge : Style

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Aug 2, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Elements of style are missing

    Should I fail to take you there

    Coitus-interruptus...

    Abandonment, I fear

    Pre-shrunk, faded glory

    Hand-me-down debunked

    Quickened, dead stories

    Unfunny brand of funk

    Tall tales of misery

    Talented, mistook

    Short of a poet;

    Book signings...

    Come the hook ~


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    dis speaks out to me
    and i embrace'd every word
     
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