Black Poetry : Stupid

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  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STUPID

    People change i recognize that
    But how do you account for the fact
    That you are nothing like the person I knew
    I can understand changes and alterations
    But for this transformation theres no explanation
    My logic tells me that you were never who i thought
    You were always false
    Faking that you were real,that you kept it real
    That you could feel what I feel
    And I feel so foolish for trusting
    for letting you in
    for permitting a liar to win
    my affections
    Sweet words,loving eyes,
    Opened thighs
    All aided this grand deception
    And I cant bring to recollection
    Ever feeling so absolutely STUPID
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    on point and so true i hear ya
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's exactly how we feel when everything we believed in our hearts to be true, never really was. I felt the disappointment and sadness in this vibe.
     
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    Don't feel stupid because you are not. Just too trusting of others especially when they show you
    what they want you to see. I think you are very nice.
     
  5. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: I'm okay mostly, just slightly bitter lol im very young so i guess its better to experience it now than later. I let it go mostly...just write bitter, angry poetry every now and then that may seem anti-female, but no its just anti-HER
     
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