Black Poetry : Stupid

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by bahati, Nov 17, 2003.

  1. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    For all your faking, for all your lies
    I can hear your cries
    late at night between her thighs
    wishing for me to come back
    to rescue you from the hell
    into which you fell the very day
    you made me walk away.
    And walk I did - silently
    with a heart full of grief
    as suddenly I had to realize
    you don't care about me or
    me being a serious part in your life.
    You wanted to use me
    your f**k-buddy I should be.
    I'm so glad I was smart enough to see
    all of this early enough
    and that I was tough enough
    to prefer the cold dark night
    to staying right by your side
    where the only feeling I had
    was that of loneliness
    after you took no time to caress my
    soul anymore.
    I was treated like whore
    but you should know
    I've come back to life again
    like the Phoenix from the Ashes.
    I am not in pain,
    and it's not me I have to blame.
    The only question that remains
    is:
    Who will actually be the loser in this game???
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think you already know the answer.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write....and the answer is within...
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tight, tight, tight, and yeah - your intelligence wins out, fo sho
     
  5. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the truth

    wonderful drop. so much truth in this piece that brings so much bullsh** to light.

    -Roni
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow....love da flow ya answer is there sek inside
    da mirror of u and see da answer
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you flow this tough
    nice drop
    feeling your strenght
    in this for real
    wonderufl just wonderful
    much love
    Peace
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the answer is pretty obivous but if you need a clue...the loser is NOT you :grouphug:
     
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