Black Poetry : Stupid Girl

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm angry for allowing a man to change me...
    He didnt just change me, he took everything that i was away from me
    i was too busy trying to make him happy
    Pushing my individuality to the side
    i'd smile,
    Saying to myself "in every relationship theres sacrifice"
    So here i sit....hollow,
    a body with no soul.....
    Empty, and lost
    with no one to blame but myself.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling your pain, but you will rise from this and fill that empty void
     
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    That you are strong enough to see your own mistake in this, speaks to your ability to overcome.

    That you are hurt by loss of self, speaks to your ability to love.

    That you penned it so succinctly, speaks to your ability to share.

    Thank you,

    Peace.
     
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    wow this was heart felt but i really wished you had got into it more so did you let him brainwash you or what?
     
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