Black Poetry : stupid dum

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SPIRITNORTH, Jan 20, 2004.

  1. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    do u know what it's like
    to have memories
    of all the lies u told?

    how the tears i cried
    day and night
    were merely candy for
    your ego?

    and i thought maybe
    i could take you seriously
    because we communicated
    so well

    turns out the cord
    that fed me thru you
    was my connection
    to mind hell

    instead of apologizing
    and just realizing
    you made a mess
    on this canvas

    you'd knaw on
    the ashes of your deceit
    too ashamed or too stupid
    to really face me

    i came to you pure
    with no intent
    to harm or dismantle
    our skies

    in the darkeness of
    your solitude you plotted
    for a perfect loves
    demise

    and with laughter
    no more
    i'll take the open door
    cause i still have what u don't

    peace inside
    a reason to smile
    and many reasons
    you won't...
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "turns out the cord
    that fed me thru you
    was my connection
    to mind hell"

    Very tight scribe indeed...much love to you for this, i feel you for sure. But like you said, at least you have inner peace.
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was real tight right here...
    and a perfect title...
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah

    Sup... I feel you on this piece. It's wonderful to hold your piece of mind after all that. Strength surrounds the veil comforting your beauty....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt scribe poet
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tight drop
    i feel this one
    flow on....
     
  7. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    HEY THANKS FOR ALL THE LUV.....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you just have to be above it all, I really felt this emotional piece...flow on.
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    spirrit this was heartfelt
    cause i,ve been there...a long time ago

    I could never smile over a lost of someone you love but
    yes as long as you know you had good intentions ..
    and you were honest and treu ..
    you have Peace in youre heart..
    when The lord is in youre heart and life..
    you can always find peace again..








    Welcome to desthee :wave:
    and keep writting poet..
    Much love:heart:
    Libertylady
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    emotive and well crafted...
    scribe on...
     
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