Black Poetry : Stupid Again

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  1. choclatefantasy

    choclatefantasy Member MEMBER

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    A piece of a** was all I was to you
    Thought you really felt for me, but that wasnt true
    You made me feel like I was special
    Bought me meals and s***
    Did some nice things for me
    Even licked my c***
    Thought you were different
    But you're the same
    Once again I look stupid
    Fallin for that dumb a** game
    Wish I could've saw through your game
    So I wouldn't have to feel this hurt and pain
    Now I sit here stupid
    As you continue being a h**
    You a nasty mothafucka
    And its gonna come back to you one day
    I just hope its not a disease, but that's where you're headed anyway
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice I really felt this
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel ya deep pain and the need to vent
    even the trick mistake that one may play
    but the game will end in a crazy way .....

    well felt ......yet raw from da feelings displayed
    sometime we can fall in traps that leave us hurt
    and broken to where we want to destroy from betrayal

    beware of our banned word list , do visit it here.............
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=10807
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we are treated less than what we are worth, yes, initially, we feel stupid. But eventually, consider it a lesson learned. I feel that folks that betray our feelings, get theirs in the end. Feeling this flow.
     
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    all i can say is truth is the light and the truth will set you free
     
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    dang, that **** is raw!!!!
     
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    choclatefantasy Member MEMBER

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    thanx, it was just raw emotion. sorry for the banned words, i was just a little angry.
     
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    Carameldlite Active Member MEMBER

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    hot to death

    :flamet:

    Girl this poem was hot hot hot. Your pain is deeply felt. You are an excellent writer. Keep up the good work.
     
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    go 'head and let it out sis...................

    Vent on!!
     
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