Black Poetry : Stunting

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Oct 31, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stunting

    My verse is calm but sometime like the burst of atom bombs
    Create radiation and devastate nations make folks seek fallout thumbs
    Up for some corrupt **** here, like the sun this stuff come into view
    And shine bright because I rhyme tight hurt eyes and alert skies blue
    Like rain make sounds on roof and keep renowned proof of my drip drops
    In Hip Hops wear flip flops in mud holes a thug bold enough at the tip top
    To wade in water plus persuade and slaughter then drown clowns and lip lock
    With girls, wear bling that’s cool and like Caesar a king that rules this stuff
    Clings to fools make them do what I say fix cars got Craftman tools enough
    To do it, my rhyme affair is like fine air it cools after a thunderstorm but
    My brain still under alarm to do writing with true lightening cloudy luck
    Like a baby I drool need a lady to refuel my tank like Texaco she got to
    Be Sexy doe even if I have to go to Mexaco she must be a real hot brew
    Explored the wild like a bored child need a toy or I’ll proceed to annoy
    Folks with City of Troy quotes, keep my energy stored by eating soy-
    Beans, like the hardest artist I learned to see and whackness concerns
    Me, like a groovy movie my end is exciting stay in wind igniting terms
    Of contract agreements need actors not factors want attackers on screen
    Like a deer I’m nimble and quick and my symbol is sick like drug feinds
    Nowadays with a misled plan end up like a dead man stomach bloated
    Swinger and like a singer I hold notes too long that hurt the true song loaded
    Sheets of music to walk the streets and use it flow art like Mozart as quoted
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So your lines do a sneak attack on us readers huh? Keep blasting us with those verses.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the flava and twist on this piece bruh !!!
     
  4. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props on this one yall for real