Black Poetry : stumbling over affection

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Jun 10, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOH...Look...

    she pleases my soul

    far beyond physical appearance...
    gotta
    find
    ..............words

    formational phrase to fit
    gotta stay true to myself--
    gotta let her see the sean that--
    everyone else knows

    I

    love that the way she thinks is--
    placed across her brow...

    i hope she looks around...
    i hope she sees me...

    (rehearsing in my mind)

    excuse me--miss...
    could i be your sole mate?
    let's exchange body messages--
    and decipher their every letter--

    let's rewrite the mental and astral alphabet

    let's recite the hyms of the stars--
    together--

    let's comb each other's ka with the virtues of life...

    let's be one--
    with
    all that
    is
    infinite.

    let's be us.


    sean.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HELL YEAH!!

    MAN!!
    YA WALKED RIGHT THROUGH DEM LINES
    BE YA SELF
    FLOW HEAD ON!!
    I SEE LOVE BOUND:heart:
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thepoetsean...

    Crafty ... with a positive charge... and well written!!

    I like the soul you expose Sean!!

    Great artistry! I have a poem for you -- entitled "The Poet". Watch the boardz.

    One :heart:
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a poem? for me?

    there is no higher honor!

    especially coming from N2...

    thanks for the read sweetheart.

    and...

    RICH--
    i'm just trying to get where u are!

    (still tryin to fly)


    sean.:D
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean...

    Why do you seem so suprised?! I definitely admire your talent & writing abilities. Brotha you've got skillz, but I'm sure you already know that... And, reassuring affirmations can elevate your spirits. I couldn't find any better way to express what I think about when I read your proses...it's just easier for me to respond by creatively writing and also my way of"exchanging gifts" with you.

    Thanx for sharing the SoulurN2!!

    :wink:

    One.
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    if you stumble

    don't fall where you can't get up

    Peace Poet

    You still down with my Street Sojaz
     
  7. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read and the advice so'ja. u owe me a session or a cypher or sumpfin man. stay up and take it lyght.

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    sean.
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'll never be able to exchange as good a gift...

    as the one you've bestowed upon me.

    thanks for you--
    your reads--
    and your words.

    your mind--
    your body--
    and spirit--

    (thanking the soul of ASISTA)
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ;) you're welcome!
     
  10. blackstar

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    u talkin' bout me right :kiss: (lol) but 4real tho that was tight i'm feelin this one.
     
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