Black Poetry : Stuck

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rashad, Jan 4, 2002.

  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stuck in a virtual sense of reality. It is just the soul in me
    yearning and churning to encrypt the script already well writ.
    Waiting and wanting my soul cries out to find that place
    where there is no doubt about life or time. For time is no friend
    of mine. Or even places where man cease to be found.
    My Soul...
    Stuck between my mind and pen as I empty out my fustrations
    about situations that never come to an end. Life so full of twists
    and turns it burns the innermost part of me.
    My Soul...
    Stuck wanting freedom and restoration for all of God's children who have been batter, bruised, and torn. Mad because I'm not able to offer assistance due to my own inconsistence to heal the world from its wicked ways and soothe the hearts of those broken hearted.
    My Soul...
    Stuck inside of me with empty solutions to pollutions created by man. Looking for paths of righteousness so my family can have
    a better and healthier way of living on God's green earth. Wanting more than to have just been here, but to have made an everlasting impact on the soul of man to change.
    My Soul...
    Cries out for you oh Lord to come heal this land and create in us
    a new heart so that we may love one another in your name. So that man and woman can live together in harmony to acheive what our forefathers died, fought for, and believed. UNITY.

    Let us come together and raise a Nation.
     
  2. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel your struggle in this piece...

    You're just on a roll aren't you? Keep listenin to your heart and lettin it flow. It just gets better and better...
     
  3. dnommo

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    ahhh yes poet..it is time to empty out...

    good scribe...
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad

    You gotz to be a natural! Im diggin your work dog! This peice says so much.

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Rashad rashad rashad

    man u speaketh to my mental
    as u please coz dis is tyght
    and like Dnommo say
    it say so much to me .....thankz bru.:cool:
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading.

    I really don't know where all of this is coming from, but I'm riding it because it feels so good.
    To Dani, thanks for you just being you. I love u:heart:
    Dnommo, u da man bra! Thanks for the read.
    Reason, Thank you very much for taking time.
    Rich, Thanks for blessing me with your work and I'll try to continue the saga...Thank you all.
    :)
     
  7. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh... that's good there.;)
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my brutha - my brutha. you burning up the page with eternal wisdom beyond your age. ****. you are on the writing tip and it is sweet. keep the flow bro!!!!
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet Rashad,

    This is a very good flow. I'm enjoying reading you. Keep'em coming.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  10. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you

    Thanks for reading Coco. Madd love & respect back at ya.
    I'll try to keep the flo coming.
    K-la, man you know what up, thanks for reading.
    MsBerry, glad you liked sis!
     
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