Black Poetry : stubborn

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  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    everytime i try to beat God's time
    i lose
    evertime i try to think what he knows
    my mind
    gets bruised

    see i have , leaned to my own understandin
    tryna take control
    of situations
    too demanding

    tryna fight battles
    with my little hands
    thinkin im bigger than
    what God has planned..

    everytime i try to beat Gods time
    i cheat
    everytime i try to out run him I
    trip over
    my feet

    cause he knows exact count
    my days and ways
    and i have to trust him
    or there's a price to pay

    i worry bout things
    that have no matter
    just fill my brain
    with endless chit chatter

    but god knows and he
    is tryna show me
    he has the perfect road prepared
    but i must listen
    and
    stop being so

    stubborn.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    i like this...
    nice flow and so real...
    thnks for sharin
     
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    and the church did say, amen....trust in the lord with all - lean not unto thine own -
    understanding - in all thy ways - acknowledge him - and he
    shall direct your paths.........

    It's so difficult to let go and let god....I've been here, tying gods
    hands from helping me because I can't leave the problem alone
    thinking I could solve it myself...

    I like your flow here, it's very thought provoking...
     
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    i like this...and i also have the same problem...you are not the only one. much love for this piece.
     
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    Feelin this and diggin your flow, MORE.
     
  6. Khasm13

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    tru indeed...
    He's got the road paved
    like mapquest
    so don't settle for less
    trust his essence...word
    tyte scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
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    This is my respond to this poem......check this out More......





    .......:bowdown: ........




    .....To GOD..........lolololol



    You feel me....its a link to tha poem...
    But this Piece here is i,m defenaty feel ya and this was just Good
    keep writting...


    Love l
     
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