Black Poetry : Struggle In Love

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes I feel like giving up
    Wondering what’s the use
    But then I think about the first time
    We kissed
    And you touched my soul
    Forever tying my heartstrings
    With yours
    And I realize that
    This love is worth the struggle
    Nothing worth having comes easy
    And
    I plan on having you
    Let us work together
    To keep the fire lit
    And the passion
    Pure
    For in doing this
    We shall
    Rise over any and all situations

    I love you
     
  2. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this one Bishop.
    it raps up relationships in
    a nutshell.

    thanx
    hw
     
  3. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good read!
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving this "conversational" tone. Very well expressed; straight heart to heart stuff. The feel is real.

    thank you

    a
     
  5. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa
    Thanks for the read.....

    Windwalker
    It's an honor to have you read my scribe..

    Alyce
    Well you know I gots nothing but mad old school love for you.....Thanks for the read.
     
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