Black Poetry : STRUGGLE CONTINUES

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like a solitary tear
    and da whisper of fear
    continues thy struggle
    as life long birth
    of struggling maze
    seem to never fade
    clashing in the waves
    passing through search
    of ancestors child
    becoming more lost by miles
    a heart broken solo pain
    leave an entrapment to da brain
    where da massa has driven deep
    killin the life as we sleep
    da struggle continues in bleep
    until we mentally release
    da yesteryears of fear
    awaken in da new year
    as proud and strong wit black pride
    forget about subside to an distinction
    how long do we struggle in da past
    how long will this last
    another four hundred year of clash
    before we awaken to da task
    da struggle continues ....................
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need to get me a wall of
    poetry.... Very very nice write $$RICH$$.

    Much luv to u
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you , look like you do ......smile
     
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    That brought forth pain in my heart.

    Beautiful.

    Thank you.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    Rich - What a haunting refrain is "how long ?" But you portray the question most eloquently in your scribe. Perhaps mental liberation is just a voluntary disregard for the "plantation dog", the "plantation guard" and the "plantation fence" still ingrained in our perceptions. I truly enjoyed your scribe. It makes you think. HH
     
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    Thank you lkoro da struggle we have been inflicted with has kept us
    mentally entraped far beyond da yesteryears .

    yes brother HH how long do we let it hunt us mentally and how do we
    really move from the plantation of perception. Thankz my brother in peace.
     
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