Black Poetry : Strong Enough To Walk Away!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Oct 30, 2001.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 10, 2001
    Messages:
    2,696
    Likes Received:
    5
    Occupation:
    Self Employed, Business Consultant
    Location:
    Kansas City, Missouri
    Ratings:
    +6
    I fell in love, not long ago
    I loved so much how could I know
    That you were not the man you said
    you were
    How could I know? That someday
    I would have to say, " this is not the
    way".
    I can't live like this though, I will miss
    your kiss.

    And I would have to pay!

    But, you gotta be stong enough, strong enough
    to walk away

    Love is sometimes blind when your thinking with
    your heart and not your mind. I never knew love
    could bring such pain. I couldn't believe that some
    folks never change.
    How could I know? That some day I would have to
    say , "This is not the way!" No I can't live like this,
    though I would miss your kiss.

    And I would have to pay!

    But you got to be strong enough, strong enough,
    strong enough to walk away!
    BJS(C)2000
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2003
    Messages:
    6,008
    Likes Received:
    44
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Praising The Lord
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +44
    Hi Sister msluciousb
    I miss you and your wisdom sis.
    This is a very strong piece
    This scribe speaks very clearly
    Peace~N~Love
     
  3. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 2, 2005
    Messages:
    2,088
    Likes Received:
    38
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Full Time Student and Independant Buisness Owner
    Location:
    Life is waiting....
    Ratings:
    +38
    Sometimes it can be so painful
    But if it is the best thing for us we need to go
    It is :time: to GO!!!
    With or without the :10800:
    Keep the Flow Sis.
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    As with all difficult tasks, walking away takes strength, staying gone, even more. Just to think folks slept on this piece, deep write.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    thing one must do to have peace yet painful
     
  6. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 12, 2006
    Messages:
    3,527
    Likes Received:
    36
    Ratings:
    +38
    I really like this !
     
Loading...