Black Poetry : stroke... ...stroke

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stroke… … …stroke

    (In my mind’s eye)
    When I look into your eyes
    I see me
    No…not a reflection of me
    But the soul of me
    Resting comfortably between
    White-sandy beaches and
    Island melodies of undying love

    I see

    Safely snuggled in my caring arms
    Your lovely form
    Resting peacefully
    I whisper sweet nothings
    In tune with the melody
    And the translation reads

    I love you

    With Najee playing in the background
    We lounge around a make-believe lake
    Relaxed by the wine of lust, love, and romance
    And, perchance, a grape or two
    We ate

    Stroke… … …stroke
    Went my caress of your
    Au natural body
    Your breathing deepens
    As my caress turns lustful
    Tugging and stroking your hardening nipples
    As ripples of pleasure
    Tickle your moistening folds
    …threatening to expose your
    Hooded friend

    Stroke… … …stroke

    I nip at the hairs on the back of your neck
    While skinny dipping in the river of ecstasy

    Engorged phallus
    Callously slips between
    Perfectly-rounded, Apple-bottom globes
    Pushing back at me

    (But intercourse isn’t an option)

    A coating of pleasurable excitement
    Perspiring softly about you
    I caress the nooks-and-crannies
    Of your delectable fannie
    Eliciting heated moans
    Of utter bliss

    Your gyrating hips signal the start of a smoldering desire
    Following guttural moans
    As your sweetness pours from you.


    As passions rise
    You roll onto your back
    Providing easy access to your treasure trove

    Enamored of you
    I make my way to the
    Thickly engorged lips
    And dip deeply into your simmering warmth

    Your aroma-scented oils sing to me
    …Assuaging me with lustful stirrings

    I push you into the sea of ecstasy
    Thrashing about wildly
    You beg me to take you beyond the place you now lay

    But I smile and say,
    Intercourse is not an option, today

    You close your eyes
    Riding the tremors of pleasure
    Coursing through your heaving body

    When it was over
    You reach for me

    Still, intercourse is not an option
    …Today​
     
  2. Siren

    Siren Active Member MEMBER

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    Wow Baller,

    I love this poem! It's really sensual. And I can just envision someone being pushed to the point of wanting something sooo bad, but you can't have it. All I can say is it's superbly written.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hot yammmmm bruh !
    this was very cascading and smoothly posed wow.....I dig it !
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    This was sensuously hot and erotic but also so soft and romantic and poignant and sensitive to me.
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sex is not always a requirement...

    ...sometimes, it's fun to put a woman in the position she, more often than not, puts us in. I LOVE TO TEASE. i love to stir the pot and watch the oils come to a simmering boil. it keeps the interest HIGH...and the end-result EARTH SHATTERING. my THANKS, for reading.

    the river floweth
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmmmmm.....and I sigh.....

    baller:
    With foreplay of this nature who needs intercourse.
    Nuff said....

    Flow like you know...


    Much Luv
     
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    Lataisha Nicole Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! This was erotic and the best part of it, was not having intercourse, getting into a person's mind is so sexy. Teasing the lips with partial kisses, and the nipples with subtle grazes. Rubbing the skin with only one fingertip, oh my....you sure have captured it here.I can tell from this write that you're on some Big Boy stuff, and rushing... is a not an option.
    Bless!
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    O...but for the games we play

    'tis nice to have those who appreciate a good chase...and all the things it entails.:) understanding that, eventually, the MEAL must be EATEN...and SPILLAGE must occur. THANKS for reading.

    the river floweth
     
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