Black Entertainment : Strivin' For A Haven

Discussion in 'Black Entertainment' started by cherryblossom, May 15, 2009.

  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    For all those:

    Minimum wage slavin'
    Fast-food packet savin'
    A better life cravin'
    Major label to off-brand waivin'
    Light bill to gas bill shavin'
    Fighting easy money temptations
    Trying not to
    Cave in
    Sleepless nights,
    Music blaring, out-poured pain ravin'
    Rough road traveled
    Praying for a smoother pavin'
    But still coming out the next day,
    Hard-knock life swinging and bravin' ​





     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    yo


    that's HIPHOP....

    I like this right here....

    like the style of this flow sis...
     
  3. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Thank you, Miss Lady!

    Just a li'l sumpn-sumpn from my heart to another. :couple:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Awesome heart felt right here sis.

    With that said i do hope of your understanding our reason for moving this from poetry
    into Entertainment where best suited
    it moreso comply with our standard rule #4 while poetry is and can be of different forms & flava
    with the video added it falls under the umbrella of Entertainment, poetry get your flow on
    is for written words poetry only.
     
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    i LOVE this song and LOVED the intro and HATE that this was moved

    the song plus the poem is just poetry in motion

    smh *sigh*
     
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    Thanks for luv, Triniti.


    And, yeah, I missed the "video rule" too. :?:
     
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