Black Poetry : Stripped

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by islander, Jan 22, 2004.

  1. islander

    islander Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He said that he wanted to see me naked...so I stripped
    He said that he wanted to inhale my fragrance and memorize it so he could sense my essence...so I reached for the first button
    Fear made me uncertain about his intentions
    But he made it clear that the study of my physical body was not for his enjoyment...not yet
    He simply wanted me to break down the bricks of the protective walls I built
    He wanted the key to my past that consumed me so he could personally unlock the pain and set it free
    He wanted to commit the joy and fulfillment of love to my memory so I'd no longer see it as a fallacy
    Rather, he wanted to be my fantasy in 3-D
    He wanted to squeeze the juice from the fruits of my spirit and use it to sweeten his herbal tea...
    So I undressed slowly...carefully, not wanting to disturb the moment
    As he offered himself spiritually...equally...internally...externally...eternally...to me

    Copyrighted @ 2004
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

    sista my sista I am SO elated to have you back home :)

    this was something that i think MANY sistas here can TRULY relate too :)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was well done and laid out very smooth
    flow on lovin the vibe
     
  4. islander

    islander Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love triniti, I'm glad to be back. Thank you too $$RICH$$. It's nice to hear from you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome happy to be reading u again
    flow on indeed
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my this was so tight
    flow on....
    nice very nice indeed
    :angel1:
     
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    this flow is vibing...so good to have you back
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
  8. islander

    islander Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks sisters. I'm loving your flows and collabos in the forum. You're both incredible.
     
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    whoa girl, where you been?????? I been missin your dope flows, like this one. it's off the hook, sister
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...the soul standing bare...this was on point...I liked this.
     
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