Black Poetry : Strip you down

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Oct 22, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Strip down to the bare minimum. Leave me something to peel. Get into your emotions. Over come your will. I need to participate in the healing process to be a part of the new birth. Don't hide behind facades and artificial make up lies. Be you. Cause I can see that your all I need. My life has been to the valley your in. I came up, knowning the deal. It won't be easy. It's scary for real. I know. Lay down if that makes you relax. Lay back into my arms in fact. I can whisk you off to my unknown land. No man can enter or command the hand of time. So give me some of yours and lets inter-twine.
     
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    I am comin ta intertwine…
    smooth in ya move…
    Strip down..
    Now soothe……..
    I am comin ta da real…
    No facades just
    Down facts….
    Layin in your arms…
    Now whisk me….ta dis land…
    Nice flow can ya tell I like…:toast:
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mzblkangel.. Thanks for the read.

    Gots to be smooth. To sooth the pain. Don't want to damage the dream. Of coming together thru seasons of challenge and change. Don't ask let it unfold. Love can bring so many new things when you strip down. Standing there not yet in your birthday suit. Leaving some thing for me to do. Uncovering all of your hidden places. Kissing the laces thats left. Unfold yourself.

    If it comes complex, handle it gently unfold .. loves tangled wreak. Saving all the essence of heart.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow tyte scribe flow on !
     
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    this was smooth as hell dude...
    nice @ss scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Thanks K.. I have learned a lot from your style and scrip. I'm gld you appreciate it. A lot of your writings inspired it.

    Thanks Ola.. your a queen in my book. You always flowing through a brothers soft places.

    $$RICH$$.. thanks for the read.. Your still the man. Congrats on your 20,000.
     
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