Black Poetry : Strip Teased...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by YeshuJah, Mar 22, 2001.

  1. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't shake it-
    this vision of you,
    doing a striptease,
    for me-
    while I sucked a Philly blunt,
    laid back in the cut and felt you
    burn my nuts..
    from on top of a table-
    between double incense burners,
    high heels and all-
    it was hypnotizing,
    mesmerizing..
    to some extent paralyzing,
    the way you looked at me-
    rubbed your **** on my thigh,
    duplicating the levels of my high-
    leaving juicy droppings of your pie.
    Best part is when we kissed,
    mouths filled with smoke
    trying hard not to choke,
    not on the toke,
    but the anticipation
    of --
    copulation--
    I'd never seen anything like this,
    it was like crack cocaine with a twist-
    then you took it all off,
    and masturbated with your back to mine,
    demanding that I only look at you
    in the mirror in front of me-
    a full length mirror,
    of black ecstasy-
    packaged and on display,
    just for me.
    I woke up in a sweat-
    silk boxers all wet,
    and there you were..
    wrapped peacefully in sleep-
    with nothing on.
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yesujah.... wwwwhhhhoooaaaa!! (lol)

    dis was SEXTRA TYGHT...
    one of those pieces that makes
    you wanna say ummmmm & lick
    your lips at the same time!! ;)

    i liked the ending the best!

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay....

    okay, okay, okay....

    (I'ma be okay in a few...okay?)

    ~whew~
    A
     
  4. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    be careful

    Sunshyne, be careful with the lip licking.. ehem, ehem, ehem.. thahnks for coming in on this though, I wrote it on the way to work while listening to a song I just couldn't shake outta my head. JAH Lives


    Alyce,
    take a deep breath.. deep breaths -:)
    its how my mind works sometimes.. a little funky.
    Stay cool.
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YeshuJah...Blak man this piece was mos' def' intense, burning, image provoking, and wickedly tight! Your scribe is admired!

    one fam, blak
     
  6. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    black

    its amazing what could happen in traffic..
    thanks for the read.

    JAH Lives.
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOW THIS WAS ALL THAT!!!!!!!!!! TOO HOT!!!!! :hot:
     
  8. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well

    whatcanItellya.. just gotta put it down as it comes..
    thanks.
    Praise JAH
     
  9. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes sir Jah

    ah Jah is So'ja type of work man, hearing ya loud and clear
     
  10. nubianlover

    nubianlover Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot shot!!
    waves of heat burns
    u flow head
     
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