Black Poetry : ...Strip Me...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Feb 18, 2004.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a song I wrote….ENJOY!

    Verse 1:

    Strip me down, with your mind
    Strip me down, read me mind
    Tell me how, you perceive
    When and how, you need me
    Strip me down, layer by layer
    Strip my crown, now not later
    Look in my eyes, deep inside
    To the core, make me blind


    Chorus:

    I want you to come unto me
    Strip me down, with your mind
    I want you to beckon unto me
    Strip me intellectually
    I need you to whisper oh so sweet
    Strip me with so much ease
    I’d like you to talk intellectually
    Strip me baby, make me free


    Verse 2:

    Strip me down, fill me up
    With your smile, drain my cup
    Keep me close, hold me dear
    Close the door, strip me here
    State you thesis, state you claim
    My pace increases, I can’t explain
    Strip me baby, ooooo!
    I need your love
    Its all so intellectual


    Bridge:

    Hair taken down
    Earrings off
    Necklace off
    Shirt comes off
    Lingerie undone
    Zipper down
    Strip me now
    I’m in love…

    (BACK TO CHORUS)
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    you stripped me bare with this one...
    very nice...i love it that your back gurl....:)
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u just stripped me like ummm ummmm !!!
    welcome home sistah wow !!
    back wit fire & desire
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somebody's been peeping in my window...somebody stole my sweet dreams...
    that was tight, it was warm, and it's bout to make me leave this computer. :wave:
    nice, nice, nice
     
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    oh this is wonderful:)
    welcome back sis
    flow on
    hearing your song
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this spicy tune, flow on with more.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i should not be having the kinda thoughts that i am having right now about that song...its sweet and sensual:blush:..gotta love that and i love it that you're back:)
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for ur comments everybody
     
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    most welcome strip me down
     
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