Black Poetry : Strike of da Panther

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    There they loom
    deep in da shadow
    of the woods
    ready to strike
    like mean people would

    just like fear they smell
    a prey a rabbit or a deer
    humans pounce out
    wit no care

    Red eyes
    heart of steel
    tongue like a razor
    to bite any thrill
    hungry to step tall
    from da shadows

    slow and meek
    then hide cause
    they really weak
    Da panther people
    u will know
    just listen when they roar

    there stride is smooth
    quiet and cool
    they move fast
    to smack yo XXX
    they pose a passion
    to defeat but on da edge
    like a creap wit cheap
    claws and lifeless notions
    like people of greed
    in city street motion
    coal black wit no soul
    just a creation from da
    system of old

    A destroyer nasty bite
    leave u cold
    deep in da night
    to womb a movement
    of coming power
    beware this final hour
    of da people panther

    Another sad tale we face .

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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the pantha peopl so slick
    dont even really have a clue
    they hurt them self
    when they prey on the weak...


    i dig this flow its speaks loud and the truth
     
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    here's da black panther...
    proteck yo neck and scamper...
    tyte piece my man...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel indeed what they feast on really not beef but soybean meat

    thankz Khasm u know man we have a lot of them running around in da shadow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some folks don't feel happy unless they're stepping on somebody's neck. But they are so slick sometimes, they out slick themselves. Liked the way you used the image of the panther in this. Flow on brotha.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful imagery in this piece...loved it
     
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    so true watz so true and they become glass we see right through them
    thankz for the visit

    hey LovelyG thankz as i work my way through the woods pass panthers
     
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    A nasty truth that is ignored too often. Nice poem $$RICH$$. Right there with ya and loved the way you worded it brotha. Peace. :peace:
     
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    yes indeed but the change is coming !
    we nolonger are prey for people panthers
    time we hunt the hunter
    Thankz brutha for the visit and on the same wave of these thirdkind
     
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    very courageous flow dear brother...
    Peace
     
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