Black Poetry : strife for life

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    out here alone
    in this world just mak'n it on my own
    all alone
    with just my backbone
    and unlearned knowledge
    which was acquired through
    life..........experiences that is

    of cold nights with no roof and
    no flight out of this hell hole jungle
    known as proverty to some
    and just plain ol' broke to others

    stomach rumblings is the tone
    that knods my head off into my
    semi-deep slumber as
    i or shall i see we
    which makes up the fifty some odd percentile
    of this shelter where i lay shouldertoshoulder
    up against robbers and babbymamas with dope fiends
    for fathers of domestic violence that is the thought of
    home

    dreams

    life

    what is left of my world
    but me in hopes of brighter days

    with the memories of "then"
    constantly reminding me of "now"
    and all though alone
    i know
    to never make the same mistake twice
    to prove history does not always repeat itself
    when dealing with the hustles of life in ones own strife for life!
     
  2. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lady

    luv ya flo.
    skills that rep the ATL.
    i can appreciate u dearly.
    thanx fa spittin'


    hw
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    iwell now

    u may walk alone but in whole heart i am beside u
    dis piece got the rip of a wisdom poet that u r
    keep me reading ladybug:heart: :toast:
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well written, dear poetess. remember that you are not alone and ofcourse, like i always say, your poetry is therapy. keep on scribin' as i continue to watch.
     
  5. ron

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    lady bug whats going sweetheart long time no hear from i have always admired your poetry.You shouldnt stay away so long.Your return is so refreshing you dont know the pain we share together.keep on doing ur thing strong sista.
     
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