Black Poetry : street warriors

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MrGhettoPoet, Nov 17, 2003.

  1. MrGhettoPoet

    MrGhettoPoet New Member MEMBER

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    they say the streets can mold u or fold u whatever u make it,
    if u bold and u cold then u know u must take it,
    strength in numbers, and patentience is a vurtue,
    n***** see u wit the ice and bling, then they wanna hurt u,
    i tell storys from the way that i see it,
    some n***** try hard but in their heart they never can be it,
    never will kno the struggle,the pain and the troubles,
    but in some cases the things mentioned can double,
    like for instance lets say u ride on a *****,
    who tried on ya *****,
    they got bats and knifes,but urs alittle bigga,
    u got gats they got gats and they pull the trigga,
    u bust back cuz there is nothin left to do,
    shots blaze and hit ya homie next to u,
    he shakin and bleedin at the mouth,
    and u realize that he will never make it to his house,
    everythings in slow motion,jus like the movies,
    u look at ya homie and see the twin uzis,
    u grab them up in both hands,
    lean at the wall and signal to ur mans,
    give em hell dont waste a shell,
    lets give these suckas alittle taste of hell,
    u take a deep breath,
    and u ease left,
    the hype is buildin pumpin through ur viens,
    u feel it raw adrenaline,flowin straight to ur brain,
    thats what u need,
    ur heart can now feed,
    and give u the power,
    to rain hell like a summer shower,
    u stand up reguvinated,and angry,the pain in ur eyes,
    given strength from ur homies that died,
    no more hesitation get a target in sight,
    stand tall dont show them ur fright,
    dont be a punk simply,
    expell the clip till u empty,
    show them n***** that ur n***** dont play no games,
    ur aim is to scare them off not hit they frames,
    and u do that well cuz they run for cover,
    ur leathal weapon has done u well like dan glover,
    u stand with pride,
    no reason to hide,
    u have lead ur team to ultimate victory,
    few men alive have overcome what haunts me,
    a few die but u knew that would happen before,
    i stand tattered but unbeaten in this dangerous game of war
     
  2. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight flow bwoy! u keep it up....... **muahzzz--smoochez
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey dis was a nice flow
    have you had a chance to read our forum rules and
    banned words list ....The N word is not allowed within
    in any kind of form it's on our banned words list please
    read and surely get a better view of words not allowed

    This piece has power and depth ...very nice
    enjoyin your flow
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm Mr & Ms ghetto poet :look:
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked this piece because it speaks of life as it is.

    But...

    I wish our street soldiers would stop the war on each other and utilize their skills and training to combat our truie enemies.

    The ones who make money off of our soldiers trying to get a little piece, dying in the streets, retaliating because their homey got killed so the cycle doesn't cease.

    I say this to you truthfully, my brother, PEACE.
     
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