Quiet Poetry Lounge : 'stream of conscious' technique...

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    my friend

    sistagyrl

    does this all the time .....:playball: Its a 'stream of conscious' technique... (I think it'll be fun to see what we come up with) I'll start off with a word/phrase and whatever comes to the mind of the next person to view it- should be added on. For example: Sticky like peanut butter... [and jelly]... rolls... [of tissue]... etc.
    SHORT Words or phrases only.
    :playball: ....i will start it


    green like the forest
     
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    blue like the sea
     
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    cloudy as da sky
     
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    green like the forest
    blue like the sea
    cloudy as da sky :thinking:
     
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    green like the forest
    blue like the sea
    cloudy as da sky


    …that’s not me
    I…Am
    Luminescent
    And hazy…like
    Fog…reflecting light
    Yet I absorb every color…
    Call me a brilliant shade of black…
    Sister to the night…
    Vixen indigo and abstract…
     
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    river of passion
     
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    green like the forest
    blue like the sea
    cloudy as da sky


    …that’s not me
    I…Am
    Luminescent
    And hazy…like
    Fog…reflecting light
    Yet I absorb every color…
    Call me a brilliant shade of black…
    Sister to the night…
    Vixen indigo and abstract…
    river of passion
     
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    like a flowing spirit moving
    forward daring not to linger
    As I move thru the tremors begin,
    a light film of perspiration covers brown,
    brown skin,
     
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    like a flowing spirit moving
    forward daring not to linger
    As I move thru the tremors begin,
    a light film of perspiration covers brown,
    brown skin,

    and “we” no longer comprehend…
    when this thing began…only that
    there is no end…/ when he and I
    commingle the effervescence of
    our essences…acquiescences
    in luminescent shades of
    glistening brown skin…
    rising like vapors into the rafters
    of our one mind…one soul and one body…
    as we create new expressions of
    …shadow art in black
    On wanton walls…from dusk till dawn
    ….He, I….we
    …fall