Black Short Stories : Strangers: The Grieving Sister

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  1. MsInterpret

    MsInterpret Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Strangers are monologues told by every day people.

    Strangers: The Grieving Sister

    I'm sorry
    Please hold on a second
    ANGIE! You see where my...
    NEVER MIND!
    Sorry. My head just isn't all there today
    It hasn't been there at all for the past 3 weeks
    *sniff*
    My little sister got caught up in some mess
    It wasn't her fault
    She had nothing to do with what went down
    Sorry, sorry...
    *sigh*
    I...
    ....
    I don't get it...
    It was a drive by shooting
    Her and some other kids were hangin' out
    at Allenmore Park
    She was only 13
    ...
    They can't find who did it
    Nobody is coming forward with answers
    This is my LITTLE SISTER!
    These...
    quote, unquote PEOPLE
    Saw something
    They know who did this
    But...
    ...But...they just don't care
    13!!!
    The bullet caught her in the side of her head
    The left side of her brain
    She had been in ICU
    *sigh
    ....
    I couldn't even look at her
    and Mama...
    She....
    Sorry...Hold on give me second


    Mama...
    That's her baby
    That's OUR baby
    We tried to keep her on life support
    But all we was doing was keeping her heart beating
    She was long gone...
    She wasn't with us no more
    At night...I heard Mama crying
    Asking God 'WHY'
    I'm not ready
    I mean it wasn't easy seeing her layin' in the hospital
    Now..
    Now, I gotta see her in a CASKET!!
    I can't take this...
    But I...I gotta be the strong one
    Daddy, dead...
    Lord, what am I gonna do?
    ....
    Excuse me.
    It's time.

    Also read, Strangers: The Missing father

     
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    Emerald_Queen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like these monologues that you're doing! This is one is touching because I have sisters and a brother, and I cannot imagine something like this happening to our family!!! Sad that is happens too often to count for families by itself! I am just very grateful!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow...dat's deep sad and well felt can't wait til da next part come out
     
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