Black Poetry : Strange Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Nov 14, 2003.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Isn't it strange we are sitting here
    me and you, after all the things we've been through
    best of friends we were for years
    many times laughter and sometimes tears
    caught up in our own tragic lives
    something came between me and you
    maybe it was her, maybe him
    mainly us and our own mistakes
    but past pain has made it so easy
    to run to eachother, fully trusting
    fully knowing, fully loving one another
    never had to be anything but real with you
    i listen to your heart, it beats for two
    you are unconditionally there for me
    even when I might not NEED you to be
    but your thoughts are with me
    and mine with you
    for the last six years
    I thought about where you could have gone
    and how things just ended between us with no other words
    thinking you simply walked away on me
    I should have known it was deeper than thee
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love throws us all for twists and turns I hear ya gurl indeed i do...
     
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    nice flow enjoyed the read
    love do indeed send u in
    all sorts of twist:angel1:
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spin: u doin it again
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah the roller coaster called love:)
    loved your flow:D
     
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    ahhhhhhhhh
    this is niceeee
    mmmm
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a flow this how we be in the turn of it
    scribe on ......lovin it
     
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    Poet I am feeling you nice
     
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    Very Nice Randee


    " I thought about where you could have gone
    and how things just ended between us with no other words "

    Not knowing or having the answers is the hard part.
     
  10. PositiveMindset

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    Hmmm...

    Nice piece that makes me feel like taking my chance and not letting one get away from me.

    Felt it completely.
     
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