Quiet Poetry Lounge : strange coexistence

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gempis, Mar 15, 2004.

  1. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how can love and hate
    exist in the same egg
    compassion
    because I can see the
    vulnerability in everyone -
    the hurt, and I
    want to reach out and
    throw love all over strangers
    distaste
    because I know that
    people can change on a dime
    everyone looks out for
    number one and they
    drop you, hurt you
    affection
    people are so interesting
    there's good in everyone
    most of the time fronts
    are just defenses for the
    tenderness within
    anger
    I get weary of all the
    idiosyncrasies, meanness
    pushing me away
    no one cares
    they suck me dry
    passion
    I want to have a
    meeting of the minds
    share common bonds
    openly express love
    give hugs
    cruelty
    I want to tell you that
    you are immature
    pound you with my
    words and open hands
    renounce you
    how can love and hate
    exist in the same egg
    wearily
    warily
    the sunshine mixed with storms
    I search for the rainbow
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....likes this flow..
    feeling it and understand...
    i think we all can relate to this...
    very well posed...
    Peace
    Angel
    glad it work for you
    and u was able to post
    very good poem my sista
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hooray, you can post now! Very creative scribe, too, I can understand why you wanted to share it, strange how such opposite energies can exist together. Very well written.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow......u mastered this to perfection sistah
    lovin it
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblk, watz and $$RICH$$, thanks so much for your support. It means a lot cause I had to release this. Much love to you all, as usual. :wave:
     
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