Black Poetry : Straight

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Jan 23, 2004.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Am I less Black
    Because I like to relax
    My hair
    Even though my color
    Is a badge I wear everyday
    You question my loyalty to my race
    When you're the man with the
    African colors on your hat
    And hair down your back
    How many Africans you know with dreds?
    And white girl fantasies in their heads?
    But yet I'm a traiter
    When two minutes later
    Britney walks by
    Catching your eye
    Taking your attention away
    From the little Black girl
    With the little Blue bag
    With the little Pink box
    Let me go home and straigten my locks.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice True Love..

    Luvin the sister just the way she is.
    Nothing better than your smile.
    My eyes have seen the glory of my race.

    :spinstar: No other can ever take your place. :spinstar:

    Come as you are.. come as you may.
    I luv you and my race.
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Hodee, i didn't know how this was piece would do...it was a spur of the moment thing i came up with last night while i was doing my hair. much love!
     
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    i do indeed feel you on this sis..
    and i flip from natural to press
    depending on my mode..
    our peeks can be harder
    on US then any other
    and it seem to me
    that those are the ones
    that are fronting
    Nice one
    hearing this Straight
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sooo much for feeling me Blue...much love to you.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true, this is wonderful. don't worry about how much we're going to love it, just go get a new man
     
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    islander Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speak sister speak!!!!
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Islander & Gempis...thank you both for feeling me. lot's of love to you!
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :teach: Only my black Queens can go from natural to pressed and still the symbol of a Princess on her chest. :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    python... much love to you baby! that was sooo sooo cute! thank you sooo much! :luvv:
     
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