Black Poetry : Straight...no rocks ...no chase.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GYPSYMAN, Aug 31, 2001.

  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think at....
    one million electrons-
    per second,
    cursed with a mind that
    N E V E R rests
    deep meditation has
    saved my soul
    there have been times when
    I believe... I was going crazy...
    staring at the moon
    feeling wolf-like
    in spirit carnivorous
    from tenement rooftops
    on booking room floors
    tied up like a hog
    waking from the chokehold blackness
    plotting to kill
    those who still roamed free
    stewing in rage while
    grinning at enemies
    calculating cold surgical like
    torture- no painkillers.....of course
    just wanting to fill the ill will
    with satisfying cadavers
    revenge was my wonderful woman
    promising life
    I used to even name the nights...Night of the long Knife...
    from a war I once studied
    ...fit perfect...
    maybe you had to be there
    dont worry ...they deserved it..just like
    ...Hot Nail Crescendo Week....

    Should I remove anymore
    of the

    "mystique"?

    Hmmmmm...lets see...
    Ive done the "drunken rage" thing
    the baseball bat swing
    ....if you like I could describe it
    real neat
    you know that funny sound..
    of wood on meat.
    ....aluminum on bone...
    "sammy sosa" ain't have **** !
    Stolen whips...Tool runs...Mad Vics..
    road trips with mad equality..
    oh here's a tip..only load clips with...
    nevermind....
    Is THIS where I need to quit
    this
    P R O S E ...not dressed in

    pretty
    clothes ?

    ...even though this chapter..... in my life IS...DONE
    where once was darkness
    I now am
    Sun...

    you're right...

    we really
    do not know
    each
    other.

    ....still wanna meet
    at the
    Gypsy Tea Room ?





    On A Continuous Journey
    Gypsyman
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooowwweeeeeee....it's tea time!!

    I loved how you flowed this hot pot!

    *crumpets*
     
  3. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter

    Thankyou 4 peepin' this one...glad u could feel this one.

    peace
    g-man
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAN ON TYME

    TEA PARTY TODAY AS U SPRAY THE HOT SHOT OFF DA POT
    MAN I LOVED THIS ONE HERE
     
  5. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich bro.... thanks 4 checkin this piece..
    peace
    g-man
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsy

    To answer your question ... Yep! Sure I do... Elm Street -- right?! :wink:


    I'm followin' erry word in dis piece.... matta o' fact, I'll need to print it out so that I'll have something to re-read when I get off of work today!

    Thanks for the tid-bits G-MAN!!!!!

    Madd :heart:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsyman, Gypsyman

    thank you for the str8 talk! I HEARD this spoken ~ and that's a beautiful thing.

    a
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Yo

    12 noon
    tea room
    we assume

    you get busy
    GYPSY
    nothing but truth coming from your lips see

    coming of age
    sprinkled wit sage
    turned the page
    trying to stay footed thru the haze
    out look on the coming days
    stands a man but to no amaze
    cause the dues have been paid

    and my to you my fist is raised


    keep the power

    DSSNY
     
  9. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alwayz looking 4 your responses....u seem to be my barometer
    now. Main or elm...The Deep is only a 3 blocks wide 5 blocks deep...Stevie could find u in the gloom....of the Tea room...
    ;)
    peace
    g-man
     
  10. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~A...............Soja

    ~A - I am lovin that u liked this....thas peace.

    peace
    g-man


    Soja - u say much with your drop ...I appreciate the connect and
    encouragement to change...u my bro. in The City....no doubt.

    one
    g-man
     
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