Khasm13 : straight caught up...(a serenti-poet and khasm13 joint)

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    The sweat drips down the small of my back

    Beginning to seep into unknown crevices

    The heat rises with each moan

    My body melts to pieces

    I shouldn’t be doing this I think

    But it disappears with your smile

    We have no reason to rush this thing

    She’ll be gone for quite awhile

    Somehow your lips find mine

    The taste of you sends juices flowing

    I wish I could stay all night

    But then someone would end up knowin

    That me and you are more than friends

    Your wife once introduced us

    So I knew we had to get together

    Out of pure demanding lust

    I know you loved her since day one

    I saw it immediately in your eyes

    But with my face, my lips, my hair

    And the sweetness between my thighs

    Now how could you resist me

    And what I already had in store

    Every time I saw you

    I left you wanting more

    The feeling of you swelling in me

    Is more then I can bear

    So grab my waist and control my thighs

    And help me take you there…



    since the first day we met
    my soul compelled me to see
    how close we could get
    the sparkle of your silhouette
    and your silky smile
    let me know
    that you were worth wild
    the giddiness when around you
    makes me feel like a child
    before, the love for my wife was so true
    and then on that wispy spring day in the park
    she introduced me to you

    yeah it was you
    you know it was you
    uh huh it was you

    i know that you and her are childhood friends
    but in the brief moments of love/lust???
    that we have to spend
    you grant me happiness to no end
    i got goosebumps when i heard you knock at the door
    i knew it was you
    cause it was the secret knock that i told you before
    you walk through the door
    with falling trench coat revealing
    a sheer body-net outfit
    and a sensuous need for sexual healing
    the desire that i am dealing
    i have been weilding
    since last week
    where within my showers heat
    our slippery bodies convulsed

    at a sexual peak
    at a sexual peak
    that made my knees weak

    now, as you're luring lips touch mine
    my figertips trace the sweet dripping sweat
    down you're spine
    with my wife gone
    now you have all of my time
    boiling bodies start to grind
    then feeling the fire, i wisp you off your feet
    headed to the bedroom in a straight line
    thinking how you're lips taste so sweet
    i gently drop you on my bed
    on top of the newly placed sheets
    looking in your eyes
    the emotions that you now crave
    is no suprise
    my swollen member connects our souls

    as swelling bodies rise
    as swelling bodies rise
    our eyes tell no lies

    with the fluent movements of blissful lust
    slow pulsating friction causes fluids to flow
    simultaneously from the both of us
    for a second my whole world is shook

    as we share that look
    as we share that look
    yeah you know that look

    then i look
    and see my wife snatching my gun
    from the shelf encased in a fake book
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A moving piece of work. Your moving back and forth thru some deep work with this scribe.
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Applause..
    feeling this duet flowing…..
    I am loving this dynamite rhythm
    what a wonderful intertwine…
    action, adventure, heart felt vibes

    It's hot in here :)...:wave:
    I love ya flow
    Peace
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....this is wonderful...i love the flow and everything...:)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!:eek::jawdrop:...can't you tell that i REALLLY liked this piece.. Both of you, this was tyte!
     
  6. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very hot :hot: piece!!!
    Is there going to be another?
    Keep em comin. You two make a hot callabo!
    Much love
     
  7. Khasm13

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    wow...i didn't think that we were going to
    get a response like this so quick...wow
    thanks fam, ya'll are the greatest...
    btw...were not done...the story is not done
    peace
    khasm
     
  8. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad to see that the story is not done!!!!!!!!!!
    Waiting on part 2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    dis was off da hook y'all brang it tyte and right
    flowhead on !! u two
     
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    This was definitely a hot duet! Encore!
     
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