Black Poetry : str8 from the heart "typing tears on my keyboard"

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tainted Luxuries

    All the days of your life

    Those things that that I loved
    All those times I embraced your sad face, with warm hugs
    From young chubbs, to the departments scrubs who looked at me and shrugged
    I look back and how can I judge
    Who’s to say that I was all that pure, innocent?
    I spent not just money, but a lot of my energy was spent

    Over you, one in my hand, half of that for me in my pocket
    That means I gave you twice mines, kept you in my locket
    With my chain, I’ll never lose, even though it fades
    Memories, “member” I kept you clean like cascade
    Cleaning your problems, I had your back, thought u had me
    That was the problem, verb confusion, you had me

    Now I’m fourth year, almost through with phase one
    Then you went and told me to get a gun
    Killing myself, my enemies with selfish pride
    Run and I hide, no ones hearing all the times I tried
    To hold you up, I watched life erupt
    I couldn’t stop it, it happened so abrupt

    Misspelling as I write how that is so parallel to life
    You misspell, but sometimes spell-check ain’t right
    This I pull from the bottom of my soul in disgust
    So hard to dispel us, it origins lay in lust
    The truth, what blossomed then to a little more than friends?
    Was complicated, how did it become a fling about ends

    After all the wrong I did, verbal abuse
    You knew I was thirsty, two pops, pac my juice
    Didn’t make since at first, till I set down
    Calling you time after time, till I got a down line
    Pleading like flip the component on your phone
    How does one condone abandoning his own home?

    It weakens me more than it weakened you
    I got me, you got a whole crew
    That will do for you, but nobody is the reality for me
    Love and war was a choice, you chose to battle me
    I don’t believe in being pacif, me and the flow make a marriage
    Like you snatched life from my carriage

    Now what i do......


    Tainted Platinum
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaa i was into it this was awesome flowin of tears
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea this was nice had me on every word,,,
     
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