Black Poetry : Stormy Night

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  1. SayWord

    SayWord Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There were stormy skies
    To match her stormy eyes
    She sat in silence as she cries
    Lightning strikes
    Thunder cracks
    A soft white sheet adorns her back
    She thinks
    She starts to back track
    Wondering what she did wrong
    It's the same old song
    Girl meets boy
    Uses her like a toy
    He took her innocence
    She thought being with him was common sense
    He said all the right things
    Talked about all the joy he would bring
    She remember the songs he use to sing
    He would serenade her
    Now he berates her
    Calling her a ****
    - a ***
    - a *****
    She's a tool he uses to scratch his "manly" itch
    But now he's sick
    And she's sick too
    Her soul is like the inclement weather
    It's all black and blue
    Because of his massive fornication
    She's left with a disease that has no correction
    Men use to think of her as perfection
    But since he couldn't control his erection
    She's stuck with a broken heart in her chest
    The rain is beating down like death
    AIDS is beating her down like death
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! an eye opener
    this was well felt
     
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    love this flow....
     
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    SayWord Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the support. This is something new. Still trying to work on it.
     
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    wow....this was tyte....real message
     
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    sayword...u come strong.
     
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    SayWord Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yall are making me blush. I can't say this enough. Thanks for the love.
     
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    "She's a tool he uses to scratch his "manly" itch"

    :( this was a sad tale but you sho did paint a vivid picture
     
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    dangggg....(speechless)
     
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