Black Poetry : (((<STORMY LOVE> )))

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ova da sea of love
    i've sailed in windz
    gusty rain and pain
    no matter what trials
    and stormz i faced
    your love worth the bliss

    My heart for u is the guiding light
    through all the past pain in sight
    i sailed the seven seas just to be
    even as my ship was blown far
    off track i use my might throughout
    the night to reach this place

    I've weep in the mission yet i am MAN !
    because i stain the blanket in tears
    for your love don't make me less
    nor am i more but i know from the east
    u see me beside the next man whom
    weep not so don't wonder my loveth :deal:

    as he laugh at me and my ship capside
    i vow in heart to say my lovin soul stayed
    true on this journey even when temptation
    river in like a bad habit i weave out the lust
    and kept my true love abound in sail :spin:

    this stormy love has taken me in
    like a world wind a gusty stream
    and it's your face i see in smiles
    cascading at me gently & softly
    yet I sailed on in search of u
    now that i'm here don't hold or judge me
    i am the King u sought and loved
    he so that stand alone dry laughing
    is not as strong but the weakest of all
    I'm happy to make this sail complete
    I love u :love:

    As i leave this note to the Man
    I weep yes but man as u when
    we stand side by side to the East
    she see u not but leave with me
    because she know i have a heart
    a soul and feelings but u it's all cold
    and lost at the river bank yet u float
    in the sea of love wishing, warm ya heart
    and she will arise as mines did
    now we on our own tropical storm making
    affectionate compassionate waves :flowers:

    SPLASHING !!! :swim: in the name of stormy Love
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i like this poetic tale
    you have a way of taking me
    on a ride each time i read you
    as i smile and nod my head...

    his lost is another man's treasure
    uncovering the blanket of gold
    which at times go unseen

    i likes this oh yeah

    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel it pose a twist yet a love found
    through a stormy sail of journey to her heart .
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A one drop RICH
    diggent he way you laid this out,
    This was a great read!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At the end of the storm is the found love.
    wonderful poetic flow dear brother
     
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    Bro. $$, this is equivalent 2 an urban rendition of Homer's Odyssey.

    Do your thang, bruh.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh My God!!!!

    This is a thing of beauty
    It is simply beautiful
    I can not tell you how you've effected me so
    with your words and the emmotion that
    you pour into the
    things you write this may be my longest reply to
    anything but you must know how you have
    effected me with your gift
    so true are thewords and nothing compares to that
    My brotha my brotha
    you must continue on your poetic path
    because you are truly setting the world ablaze
    with your talent and skill
    :thanks: :welldone:
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let me give thankz to all of u wonder poet's and supporters

    THEONE i humble thank u for always warm words and great flowz ya self

    BLUEWATER hey sista been awhile but so honored to read yo reply and
    feel ya love again in this joint welcome back sweetie ....Thank u

    PositiveMindSet .....thank u so much for the uplifting words it means a lot

    Soulful2006 .......I am so humbled by the embrace poeticly that has touched
    u and allowed me to see and read your great gift and creation thank u so much
    surely i will continue my journey in tyme poeticly .
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aye Captain, she's come to... in an angry sea of love ~
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't know what I'm the most awestruck about, the way you relayed this story, or the heartfelt love behind it. I am speechless about the depths of this, and I am so feeling this. Flow on brotha....