Black Poetry : Stormy love surrenders

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This beauty
    so kind & divine
    gentle wit care
    yet did she notice
    he was there

    his love spool
    like a river
    from heart a
    tender giver

    crossin paths
    daybreak noon
    soon together
    in the same room
    flashing smiles
    cover plate
    surrendering

    picture flash
    soulmates
    caressin love
    feeling great
    mask of hope
    thunder roars
    storm breaks
    sunshine love
    two souls make

    Desires cry tears
    da hunger fears
    feeling strong
    whispers in soft tone
    giving in as he gave up
    rain beating deep inside
    tappin like congo drums
    leaving my heart beckon
    lightening crash breaking
    my soul lone together
    we hold , molding closer

    i now surrender to this
    fate and give my love
    compassionly direct
    to an unforgetable love
    and the warmnest
    no longer passing through
    inside my arm where u
    make home and surely
    we can keep surrendering
    our stormy love making
    rain drop of perfection
    come be my fiddle . :luv:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dreamy flow i likes this indeed nice
    within the mist of the storm of passion love found home


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    now we know why they say love and storms
    go together lightening love is born and that can
    be divine ..........Thankz sis for the support
     
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    A love, like the warm rays of sunshine, break through the storm, creating such a passion. I liked the soothing imagery here in this lovely read. Flow on.
     
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    yes as they say sweet love come on stormy nights
    i found this to be divine and blissful ........Thankz sis.
     
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    You took it to a whole nother level with this one, $$RICH$$. Love the way ya brought it.
     
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    big ups gempis it was one of my mental twister
    that tell the tale of love and loving
     
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    Poetic Justice

    Thank u dearly it's all :luvv:
    from the sweet rain drops :rain:
     
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    Love has always, found it's way to love, and certainly worth going through all the channels ...to get to it.
    awesome piece of work poet, and thanks for sharing your love.
     
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