Quiet Poetry Lounge : Storms and Maelstroms

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dior Robynsonne, May 2, 2004.

  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The air
    cools and
    through the vapors
    I gaze.
    My feet tread the
    surface of dark waters
    where wild currents run.
    There are dark maelstroms
    and from the watery depths
    rises a fleeting, underwarter grotto,
    the storm rages above and
    I feel close and at home.
    The rage burns
    and betrayal stands next
    to me, kissing me smoothly.
    I groan in primal passion
    and find myself
    falling under the spell.
    The eye of the hurricane keeps
    me fully calm and a bit stable.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Betrayal can look you straight in the eye, but if you don't want to see it, then for you it's not there. Intriguing piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DEEP REAL FLOW FEELING YA
     
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    This had me like WOAH had me trapped sometimes rotten strawberries taste as good as honey :read:
    tyte deep flow:wink:
     
  5. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your both right. Thank you both for the love.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    such strong visuals...

    *snaps & applause*

    Excellent scribe!
     
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    liking this Dior
    yes deep and real
    missing you
    flow on
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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